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 介绍你的学校

 【要求】

 下周将有一批外宾来校参观,请你给外宾简要介绍你校的情况。内容包括三方面:

 校史和成绩。

 学校规模和主要设施。

 师生状况(词数 100—120)。

 【范文】

 An Introduction Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it. Now many of them have become scientists, professors and engineers. Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation. They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture. Our school is a key middle school in our province. It has thirty classes with over 130students. Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building, several laboratories and a large playground. Last year, a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books. All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well. Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student. 【评语】

 文章简洁得体,结构鲜明,语言流畅,介绍具体。读后让人对学校概貌了然于胸。

 旅游事业

  【要求】

 要求:旅游事业对我国具有举足轻重的作用。请以 Ways to Improve China"s Tourism 为题为我国旅游事业的发展提几点建议。(提示:扩大宣传,改善旅游设施,提高服务质量„„)

 【范文】

 Ways to Improve china"s tourism

 Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However, tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done, China"s tourism will definitely be improved. First, our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second, facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally, the quality of service should be improved. Don"t tell people their ideas are bad unless you"ve got a good one. 【评语】

 本文第一段提出问题,第二段解决问题,“first”,“second”,“finally”等词的使用,使整篇文章条理格外清晰。

 周末

  【要求】

 周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。

 周末对于人们来说意味着什么。

 每个人都有自己度周末的方式。

 我是怎样度周末的。

 【范文】

 Weekends Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family. Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations. I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

 【评语】

 全文思路清晰,论述充分,语言流畅易懂。用词讲究,注意了词语搭配,没有重复、堆砌之感。

 旅行

  【要求】

 暑假就要到了,许多同学都会选择旅游作为度假的一种方式。的确,旅游对一个人的身心健康颇有好处。那么就请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句,写一篇旅游的文章。

 Travel is a very good means of broadening a person"s perspective. Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. 【范文】

 Travel Travel is a very good means of broadening a person"s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures, meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much, you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences, but also be aware of the vastness of nature. Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience, which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later, you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences, thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind. The field"s his study, nature was his book. Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive, but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle, which, although slow, can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature. 【评语】

 本文首先陈述了旅游能够开阔人们眼界的原因,接着指出为什么旅游能够消除烦闷、抑郁的心情,最后说明进行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的优缺点。本篇各段解释言简意明,主题突出。“come into contact with„”,“enrich you knowledge and experiences”,“be aware of the vastness of nature”,“disperse your boredom”,“broaden your mind”等词语的恰当搭配,生动而准确地表现出了旅游的益处。

 如何利用空余时间

  【要求】

 题目:你将参加校园英语讲演比赛。现在需要写出一份简要的底稿,底稿应包含以下基本要点。

 随着工作时间的缩短,空余时间越来越多了。

 如何利用空余时间。

 利用空余时间的益处。

 题目自拟。

 【范文】

 Use of Free Time Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment, but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer, and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping, what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school? Use of free time often discloses much about one"s tastes, values, interests and personality. What may be one man"s leisure, however, might be another man"s work. In leisure hours, some may turn to the humanities: literature, magic, art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports, politics, voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties, travelling, or just loafing. Obviously, the use of free time is a good means of relaxation, but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well. So the good use of free time will make life rich, colorful and rewarding. 【评语】

 这篇文章写得很有水平。说理深入浅出,语言丰富晓畅,例证详实,句式灵活多变,使得文章生动并吸引人。开篇用问句,引出下文;结尾点题,总结全文。并且很有文学性。

  节日出行

  【要求】

 和外国朋友交谈是文化生活中很重要的一部分,但是谈什么话题却要慎重考虑,因为各国风俗习惯不同,谈的东西要关涉到禁忌、兴趣。学校的英语角将要组织一次对外交流活动。请你以书面形式写一些可以作为谈话的材料。

 【范文】

 Holidays and Outings It is common in English to ask people about their holidays. In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this. If the holiday has not yet taken place, then their holiday plans can be talked about. And if it is already over, then where they went, whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed. Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays. Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel, either at weekends or during their holiday periods, so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions. They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why, especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides. Take vacaticn and long weekends. Never let vacation time expire. 【评语】

 看完上文,可知这实际上是一篇讨论英语话题的文章。从这个角度来写“Holidays and Outings”这个题目可谓不无新义。但是在与外国人交往时谈些什么都是一个很现实的问题。本文提供了这一范例。全篇也围这个问题来写,几乎每句话都是紧扣中心的。比如它始终突出了这是一个话题,就反复用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等词。

 污染的环境

  【要求】

 世界环境日到来之际,你将代表你们班以一个污染的环境为题向全校同学发出一封倡仪书,先描述列举环境污染对人类健康的危害,然后号召大家保护环境。

 【范文】

 A Polluted Environment Environmental pollution is a serious social problem. It poses a terrible threat to men"s health. The atmosphere is filthy. The air is thick with dust and burnt oil. Dark smokes are being emitted from chimneys, and choking fumes are being released from numerous vehicles. Stay a little while in a big city, then wipe your forehead with your handkerchief, it is black. Hang out your washing on the line to dry, you will have to wash again. Garbage is left to accumulate in unsanitary heaps that attract flies and give off bad smell. Nor is the pollution confined to air and land. Large quantity of sewage and chemical waste are dumped daily into rivers, lakes and the sea, which kills millions of fish. Noises coming from honking cars, rumbling machines and broadcasting loudspeakers may make a person nervous and irritable, even drive him crazy. Environmental pollution is responsible for many diseases that are disabling, or bringing death to human beings. In short, let"s take good care of our mother globe, not only for the well-being of ourselves, but also for that of our future generations. 【评语】

 本文是描写文,以主观描写的方式,具体、形象地描绘了被污染的环境。文章突出强调了污染对人体健康有极大危害这一主题。语言简练有力,句式总体上讲也较简单,但有效地表达了倡议书所需的语气。文章感染性强,特别是以祈使句作结,增强了本文的号召性。

 创建绿色城市

  【要求】

 随着经济的快速发展,大城市中的高楼越建越多,道路越修越宽,但树木却越来越少。以国庆五十周年为契机,国家号召各大城市努力整顿市容,拆除违章建筑,增加绿化面积。这无疑是个造福子孙的明智之举。请你以下面三句话分别作为三段段首主题句,以绿化我们的城市为题,写一篇文章。

 With industries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced. Making cities greener has many advantages. Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts. 【范文】

 Make Our Cities Green With industries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduces. Efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees. But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants. Making cities greener has many advantages. First, it can make our air cleaner. Some researchers have proved that trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption. Second, it can make our cities more beautiful. With trees and flowers everywhere, living conditions can be improved. Finally, it can produce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources. Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts. People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment, but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions. 【评语】

 本文按照题目所给的三个主题句分三段展开论述:论点突出,论据充分,层次分明。语言连贯流畅,表达准确。

 电脑时代

  【要求】

 在一次主题为“电脑时代”的学校征文活动中,你计划以“The Computer”为题写一篇文章参加评选,你的辅导老师帮助你制订了一个写作纲要,如下:

 计算机正广泛被用于各行各业。

 在过去的五十年中,计算机得到了迅猛的发展。

 计算机最终还是由人来设计和控制。

 【范文】

 The Computer The computer is widely used in all phases of society. In industry, business, education, medicine, nearly all walks of life, computers have made their appearance, providing great speed and accuracy for our work. Computers have been used in the home, offices, laboratories and research institutions, functioning as the most efficient and versatile instruments for calculating, sorting, filing, recording and distributing. Computers are indispensable to modern civilization. Without computers, our life and our society will undoubtedly suffer a big regression. During the past five decades the computer has been rapidly advanced. Ever since the computer came into being, it has experienced the development of several generations, which are based respectively on vacuum tube, transistor and integrated circuit. Early computers were of great size, and had no match for the latest electronic computers in speed and accuracy. The Latter is capable of processing the most complicated information and reaching solution to problems in a fraction of time. At present, efforts are being made not only to bring the hardware to perfection, but also to improve the quality of the software. 作文的内容千变万化,这就要求我们丰富自己的知识,特别是各行业的最新动态。只有这样,才能自如地处理各种题材和内容。

 Computers must be instructed and programmed by people. In spite of the remarkable skill of the computer, men can never become its slave. Computers are not creative. They work according to men"s instructions. So the development of computers and their use will depend upon the ingenuity of men. Although there are times when computers seem to operate like a mechanical “brain”,their achievements are not comparable to what the minds of men are able to do. 【评语】

 全文按照题目所给主题共分三段,以说明为主,第三段具有议论性质。本文层次清楚,表达准确,句与句之间联系紧密。该文题材涉及当今热门话题,许多与电脑有关的词汇和表达法对同学们有参考价值。

 电脑

  题目:计算机是现代科学技术最杰出的成果之一,它无处不在,与我们生活的各个领域息息相关。

 请以“Computers”为题,写一篇 100 个单词左右的英语小短文。

 要求写出计算机的具体用途和人们对于计算机应用的态度。

 【范文】

 Computers One of the greatest advancements in modern technology has been the invention of computers. Computers are changing the way people live and work. They are already widely used in industry, business and in academic institutions. With the popularization of science and technology, computers have found an increasingly wide application in all fields. A computer can do a lot of work. It is capable of doing extremely complicated work in all fields of learning. It can solve the most complex mathematics problems. Computers are able to store large amounts of information, which can be recalled rapidly at any time. The truth of the matter, however, is that any new technology has a “dark”side. The problems caused by the use of computers are quite different. For example, assembly lines will be a slow process to retain workers to build and operate new equipment. Nevertheless, the dark side of the computer shouldn"t mean that we should abandon the use of computers. Technology only can make the real work cheaper, faster, and less tedious. It cannot solve problems. 【评语】

 该文从现代化的技术革新角度来谈计算机,然后在第二段里讲到,随着科学和技术的普遍应用,计算机也大放光彩,具体的例举了两个用处。最后一段里,用“the truth of the matter”,再加“however”转折,说明了计算机的“dark side”,文章全面而重点突出。

 保护水资源

  【要求】

 题目:“世界环保日”即将到来,你将为校广播站写一篇宣传保护水资源的稿件,包含如下要点:

 水是必不可少的。

 人类面临严重缺水问题。

 我们应该怎么做。

 【范文】

 Conserving Water Resource Water is indispensable to our life and the development of national economy. It is often described as the source of all living things and the lifeblood of agriculture and industry. Without it, nothing could grow and out world would become a terrible desert. The world we live in is now faced with a severe shortage of fresh water. According to some official figures, more than 1,700 million people in the world don"t have enough clear water to drink and over 25 thousand people die of water related diseases daily. So, all of us should actively b save water. It"s our obligation for the benefit of the future generations. 每篇文章都会有自己的特色,要尽力突出自己的闪光点。

 【评语】

 文章条理清晰,层次分明,语言流畅,用词灵活不落俗套。运用了一个比喻,使文章增色不少。

 机会

  【要求】

 题目:机会(opportunity),机会,对每个人的成才都很重要,不同的人对机会有着不同的看法。在人的一生中,你会面临许多机会,也会错过很多机会。那么你是怎样看待机会的呢?请写一篇短文谈谈你对机会的看法。

 【范文】

 Opportunity Some people regard opportunity as the most important part of their life. It"s the way to success. So when they see their friends succeed, they will complain that they are not lucky enough to have

 the opportunity. But other people think that opportunity is sheer luck, with their hard work, knowledge and skill, opportunity will be waiting for them everywhere. Although the attitudes towards opportunity are different, opportunity is important indeed, and no one should neglect. It can make a person successful. We should grasp every valuable opportunity and make good use of it, otherwise nothing can be left with us but regret and disappointment. But I think it is not opportunity itself that decides

 a person"s success or failure. It is fair to every person, I think. To grasp the opportunity, we need knowledge, skill and experience. In a word, opportunity is important but not decisive. 【评语】

 本文层层推进,首先列举两种对立的观点,然后阐述机会的重要性,最后以自己的观点结束全文。文章很有深度。从语言上讲,说理透彻,也很生动,避免了题目一大就空的毛病。此外,文章在逻辑上严密,观点不偏不倚,不失为一佳作。

 机会

  【要求】

 题目:机会(opportunity),机会,对每个人的成才都很重要,不同的人对机会有着不同的看法。在人的一生中,你会面临许多机会,也会错过很多机会。那么你是怎样看待机会的呢?请写一篇短文谈谈你对机会的看法。

 【范文】

 Opportunity Some people regard opportunity as the most important part of their life. It"s the way to success. So when they see their friends succeed, they will complain that they are not lucky enough to have the opportunity. But other people think that opportunity is sheer luck, with their hard work, knowledge and skill, opportunity will be waiting for them everywhere. Although the attitudes towards opportunity are different, opportunity is important indeed, and no one should neglect. It can make a person successful. We should grasp every valuable opportunity and make good use of it, otherwise nothing can be left with us but regret and disappointment. But I think it is not opportunity itself that decides a person"s success or failure. It is fair to every person, I think. To grasp the opportunity, we need knowledge, skill and experience. In a word, opportunity is important but not decisive. 【评语】

 本文层层推进,首先列举两种对立的观点,然后阐述机会的重要性,最后以自己的观点结束全文。文章很有深度。从语言上讲,说理透彻,也很生动,避免了题目一大就空的毛病。此外,文章在逻辑上严密,观点不偏不倚,不失为一佳作。

 高考题目1 (1 号) )

  作文题目

 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

  60%的同学认为

 40%的同学认为

 1.不应该收门票

 2 公园是公众休闲的地方

 3l 如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象

 1.应收门票,但票价不要太高

 2.支付园林工人工资

 3.购新花木

 注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。

  2.词数:100 左右。

  3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee

 Dear Editor.

  I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance

  fee should be charged for parks.

  高考 满分作文 1 1(1 号题) )

 Dear editor,

  I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

  With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

  Yours truly,

 Li Hua

  高考满分作文 1 2(1 号题) )

  Dear editor,

 I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?

 Yours truly,

  Li Hua

  高考满分作文 1 3(1 号题) )

  Dear editor,

 I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

 Yours truly,

  Li Hua

  高考满分作文 1 4(1 号题) )

  Dear editor,

 I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should

 be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

 Yours truly,

  Li Hua

 高考满分作文 5 51 (1 号题) )

  Dear editor,

 I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?

 Yours truly,

  Li Hua

  高考题目2 (2 号) )

  作文题目

 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为 25 平方米,月租 500 元。

  注意:1.词数:100 左右:

 2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

 高考满分作文 2 1(2 号题) )

  作文:

 I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

 Hope you will come here soon!

 All the best!

  Yours,

  Li Hua

 满分理由

  本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

 高考满分作文 2 2(2 号题) )

  作文:

 Dear Bob,

 Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

 I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

 Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport,

  see you.

 Best wishes !

 Yours,

 Li Hua

 满分理由

  本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点

 高考满分作文 2 3(2 号题) )

  作文:

 Dear Bob,

 How are you these days?

 I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

 There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

 Yours,

 Li Hua

  满分理由

  本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

 作文:

 Dear Bob,

 I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.

 You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month.

 Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!

  Yours,

 Li Hua

  满分理由

  本文内容具体,详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,语言结构富于变化,错落有致,顺畅圆润,尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,为文章增色不少。

 高考满分作文 2 5(2 号题) )

  作文:

 Dear Bob,

 I’m glad to hear from you.

 Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you.

 The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

 It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

 Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

  Yours,

 Li Hua

  满分理由

  本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

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